Animatic Feedback

After showing the animatic to our media group we took notes on their feedback, which are as follows:

Good Points

• Idea of swing - girl on swing at beginning, not on swing at end
  
• Editing - flashes/flickers/flashbacks create suspense
  
• Following conventions - hiding identity of man by covering parts of face
  
• Atmosphere - happy to start with (children playing), at end it turns to sinister and unhappy

Things to work on

• Shot duration - shot at the start of animatic was too long
• No sound - did not create as much atmosphere without sound